http://footnotes.disqus.com/A forum for discussion of Derek C. F. Pegritz's Footnotes to the Human Species stories.enThu, 03 Jul 2008 15:17:04 -0000http://footnotes.pegritz.com/2008/07/02/city-of-pillars-chapter-3/#comment-809155I've actually started writing another story, "Lies Beneath," which actually follows the politics and begins with the line, "I was there the day the former President and his Human flunkies were executed."pegritzThu, 03 Jul 2008 15:17:04 -0000http://footnotes.pegritz.com/2008/07/02/city-of-pillars-chapter-3/#comment-807634Really good stuff. You're doing an amazing job of slowly building the tension. I also like the hints of the back story regarding the politics.Jason BrezinskiThu, 03 Jul 2008 12:12:21 -0000