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City of Pillars / Chapter 3

Started by pegritz · 1 year ago

“So. What’s it like?” I mumbled as I leaned against the kitchen sink in Greg’s hot, narrow house, staring out the flyspecked window over it, staring at the filthy grey sky above. Dawn was soaking into the concrete sky above the Bronx, a flat plane of cloud like wet tarmac sweating a greasy rain onto the city. The grass in the postage-stamp of backyard ... Continue reading »

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  • Really good stuff. You're doing an amazing job of slowly building the tension. I also like the hints of the back story regarding the politics.
  • I've actually started writing another story, "Lies Beneath," which actually follows the politics and begins with the line, "I was there the day the former President and his Human flunkies were executed."

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